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Features No 88-The unspoken...

Journal Entry: Mon Feb 27, 2012, 10:08 AM
we are drops of water on rice paper
hardly visible
branching we bleed
droopy and thin with reaching
but we have soaked in; our surface lost
there'll be no retrieving
we are unrequited
our dreams discarded

"The Unspoken"
by :iconrinnyi:  [link]






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Helplessly
An artist trapped me
within her own dilemma,
she made me ridiculous.

What have I become?
An object without being,
a cypher denied liberty.
Stitched LipsStitched Lips

In front of you I'm powerless
Wind's breath lost among willows
So it's only my pillows
To whom love I can confess

Sometimes I wish to disappear
My voice and hands do tremble
Then all I do is ramble
On my own and swallow tear

So bitter compared to a kiss
I once hope to deliver
Sultry, yet tender quiver
Will provide that I won't miss

Until then I'll keep my lips stitched
Reveries my heart feeding
At least dreams won't be bleeding
For their treasure have been ditched
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Please tell me what you think of my new work..Your opinion means so much to me!:huggle:


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Have a good week,my beloved friends!!Take care!Thank so much you for being here!:love:

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:icondarlingangel0565:
=DarlingAngel0565 Mar 4, 2012  Professional Writer
Yet you know me my Beloved One, I always will :heart: :huggle:
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*Momotte2 Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful feature ! :love:
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:iconchryssalis:
Thank you soooo much,my lovely Helene!!!:bow::huggle::love:
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:iconlucilaleyla:
*LUCILALEYLA Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow beautiful features dear Athina :love:
thank you so much for adding my work I do appreciate your kindness :heart:
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:iconchryssalis:
My true pleasure,my dearest Lucila!:love:
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:iconlucilaleyla:
*LUCILALEYLA Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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:iconthedarkenedbride:
Mood: Joy *TheDarkenedBride Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much, princess ATHINA :iconunicornglompplz:
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:iconchryssalis:
My true pleasure,my dearest Gabriela!!:huggle:
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:iconalecbell:
So much interesting work, Athina. Thanks for including my poem!
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:iconchryssalis:
My true pleasure,my dearest Alec!!:huggle:
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